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[Go make this song yoursel]

So it shall be done

And it has... well, sort of. I only worked with part of it that I liked.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/426942

moobella responds:

YAAY thanks for that XD

[A Sad-ish Song]

blargaerabarlg

Fruity Loops?

A lot of parts felt thin. It's not bad, but I frequently found myself itching to move the time marker up to get to the next part of the song.

I think if you took the whole song and condensed it to about 2:30 without really removing anything, it'd be a lot better.

Also, you should do a little EQ work on your bass drum, perhaps with some subtle reverb.

I think some compressors are in order if they aren't already included.

I'd like a shot at remixing this if you don't mind.

moobella responds:

Lol whats with the title? XD
No, I use garage band. I'm still a noob ;)

Thin? Maybe I should add more bass :/ Sorry it's slow XD I will uh.. change it now :D

Ok I will do that. Yea, I always found myself spacing out when listening to my song. Its long and boring xD Ok now it's 3:30
Ignore the crappy drum sounds. My computer crashed so now I don't have any better drum tracks. Same with other track instrument thignys :[

I dont mind you remixing my song :D You can give it a better title! XD Ok I fished editing it :D It is 2:20 or somthing *Goes and posts it*

Oh yea and thanks for the review ^^ (it was very useful)